enjoy oct 31st everyone.

ok, as the title proclaims, i need some writing advice on close quarter combat with weapons. ie, knives, hatchets, and the such. more to the point, i need advice on his to describe it in a "fluid" way, so that it does not become hard to read or boring or over descriptive. any advice (or sites or short bits of writing) u can share would also be good. thanks in advance for any help

could it actually turn out to be my first novel. i hope so. nevertheless here is a first preview chapter (in rough copy form). please enjoy [link]

so i will be uploading a series of new pictures this week (finall >.>, i know its been a long time coming. sorry. i hope you enjoy them. thanks

"No one knows what it's like

To be the bad man

To be the sad man

Behind blue eyes



No one knows what it's like

To be hated

To be fated

To telling only lies



But my dreams

They aren't as empty

As my conscience seems to be



I have hours, only lonely

My love is vengeance

That's never free



No one knows what it's like

To feel these feelings

Like I do

And I blame you



No one bites back as hard

On their anger

None of my pain and woe

Can show through



But my dreams

They aren't as empty

As my conscience seems to be



I have hours, only lonely

My love is vengeance

That's never free



When my fist clenches, crack it open

Before I use it and lose my cool

When I smile, tell me some bad news

Before I laugh and act like a fool



If I swallow anything evil

Put your finger down my throat

If I shiver, please give me a blanket

Keep me warm, let me wear your coat



No one knows what it's like

To be the bad man

To be the sad man

Behind blue eyes "

by: the who

also seen here on youtube: [link]